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It's years since I wrote this but your own piece echoes the mood:

Finding ourselves in the clear

light of morning

All skin, perfect and smooth

My intoxicated eyes smiling up to yours

half closed as you linger above me

hovering in mid-swoon

ready to sink into delight

Ready to drown in the river with me

bright and clear as the morning

catching us now

carrying us along in its tide

And we just want to be swept downstream

in the rush of the rapids

surging strong and clean

Drown in the depths

to die together

and never be alone again

Surprised to survive

we emerge on the other side

floating

adrift

downstream

Rejoicing as all the angels converge

and sprinkle us with golden light

and golden drops of dew

Raining from the great red jewel

that hovers above

everyone in love

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